Cicit tiung
Kerik cengkerik
Pecah hening senja


Kau renung
Kau tenung
Seolah mimpi menghayun


Bimasakti menyusur galaksi
Papan dan paku sebagai saksi
Kampungku, laun kau pergi.

13 comments:

problogger said...

what is the meaning of "melayung"?

Eddie said...

I pakai bantai je bila tulis sajak.
melayung-- i pun tak paham apa tu melayung.
kekeke

problogger said...

haha.. your haiku is getting better..

this is how "creative writing" is defined..

Patrick Leong said...

nice picture. the first picture, thats your villa ?

~AnGeL~ said...

y u suddenly so poetic? take your time with the photos... no hurry.

Anonymous said...

the girl had a killer stare!
AL

Eddie said...

Patrick : haha, i wish i can have that piece of land.
Anglene : I was trying to sharpen my Malay again
AL : Don't ever try to think of using expired herbs. You can try on yourself though..hehe

Nightraveller said...

You definately shld find a Malay, coz Japs wont be able to appreciate your talent...but then, kena pikir itu convert punye poblem pulak...hehe

Eddie said...

Like Sepet case huh!

Anonymous said...

Alah.....cliche phrase "Love conquers all!"
HAHAHAHAHA
AL

problogger said...

how come i saw a black guy squating near a deer?

Eddie said...

mmulibra - i dont understand u

NoTtO said...

i like a chicken..